Cinematography video feedback/learner response

 1) Type up your feedback/comments from your teacher.

WWW: Fade in at start, clear typography, appropriate use of sound work, range of cinematography

EBI: more detailed description, remove unnecessary titles, keep some clips on for longer, abrupt transitions and ending 

2) Now reflect on your work and write your own summary of the comments and feedback you have received. Write three WWWs and three EBIs.

WWW: good use of typography, variety of cinematography, appropriate sound 

EBI: bad quality videos, use the same clips that are filmed on the day, better transitions 

3) Learner response: think about what you learned about cinematography making the video and also watching others. What will you do differently when you start the coursework in the summer? What tips or tricks have you learned from others that you can use next time? Are there any specific aspects of camerawork that you need to revise or practice?

From watching other people’s cinematography and the feedback, i have learnt that I need to use the variety or same cinematography but use the clips for longer, also to right a detailed description about my video